In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Nowadays, many people leave their
hometown
and move to Fix the agreement mistake
hometowns
big
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the big
a big
city
to live and work because they think Fix the agreement mistake
cities
life
in the city
will be better than the
small villages. Change preposition
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the primacy and drawbacks when you live in a small community.
There are a lot of reasons why small community, some of them are that the atmosphere here is very peacefulRemove the preposition
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,
and that the people who live here are very sociable. Remove the comma
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In contrast
, if you live in a big city
, you will have to face busy life
, polluted air and jaffic
jams at rush hour. Correct your spelling
traffic
In addition
, when you live in small
village, you don't need to for food, vegetable or fruit because you can in your garden. Add an article
a small
Thus
, having a peaceful life
in the countryside is one of the good choices when you feel bored with city
life
.
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also
has more bad effects, for instance
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fracture
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students have to leave home to study in the Correct word choice
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city
and job opportunities are still low. Therefore
, life
here is so quiet and few exercises so it difficult
for people to develop themselves.
To sum up, living in a small village has more benefits and Add a missing verb
is difficult
disadvantges
so you should choose Correct your spelling
disadvantages
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