Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer.

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devices like computers,

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in which individuals can get information regarding

history

as well as some beautiful

art

creativity with the help

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devices.

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the ensuing paragraphs. Commencing with the primary reason to counter

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situation is that

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museums

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gives

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real experiences of

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world.

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modern

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do not aware

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and they are not able to value

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history

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towards our

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ancestors

decreases day by day.

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public

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the economy of the host nation. Due to

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fact, some tourists are

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painting and drawing which is related to mainly past

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, tourists

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such

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art

exhibition and spend their income to purchase

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.

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around 10% revenues from

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museums

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side of

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rational information in deep at

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and anywhere in

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world. For

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reason, we can get easy access

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any past

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time. To conclude, even though computers provide easy access as well as

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sufficient

information to the

individuasl

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individuals

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advance

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devices and it

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help

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the economy of

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. These reasons are more logically acceptable.