BULLYING BEHAVIOR HAS BECOME A MAJOR PRLEM AT SCHOOLS. WHAT ARE THE CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS TO THE PROBLEM?

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A major issue in the present day is bullying
behavior
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at school.
This
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essay will discuss why
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is the problem and
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suggest
some practical solutions. One of the main problems is that people are not equal. We are not
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in many ways
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as gender, skin colour, beauty and financial status.
Human
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Humans
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are social
creature
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, we try to stay in
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a group
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and judge what we think they are different.
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the early century, Gays and
Lady boys
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are diagnosed
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mental
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. Disables are treated as
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second class
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.
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,
these attitude
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this attitude
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and
behaviors
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were
transferd
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transferred
through generations. Another issue is that they want to be accepted by their friends and gangsters as I
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mentioned that
human
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humans
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are
social
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a social
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creature
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. They want to be cool and want
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dominant
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others. Recently,
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provided information that one popular actor used to
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fun of his friends including disabled people. At that time, he was hot at school,
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after
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news
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, he was banned by his
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fan clubs
. In order to tackle
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problem, there are a number of effective solutions.
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of all,
schools
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should set rules to make students equal even
they
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if they
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are rich or poor.
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,
schools
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should have their own student uniforms in order to let children look the same. The
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way out is
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to educate
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these adolescents. Let them know which are good and bad things. Having lessons for new era norms and cultures. After doing these things, students would know the
different
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of
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this
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world and accept each other the way they are. In conclusion,
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essay examined two concerns resulting from the
children'behaviour
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children behaviour
children behavior
of bullying at
schools
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; people are not equal,
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and human
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human
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humans
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want to be accepted. To tackle the
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, the solution is for
schools
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to set their own rules. To address the latter, it is advised that
schools
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should educate their student.
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