BULLYING BEHAVIOR HAS BECOME A MAJOR PRLEM AT SCHOOLS. WHAT ARE THE CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS TO THE PROBLEM?
A major issue in the present day is bullying
behavior
at school. Change the spelling
behaviour
This
essay will discuss why Linking Words
this
is the problem and Linking Words
sugguest
some practical solutions.
One of the main problems is that people are not equal. We are not Correct your spelling
suggest
same
in many ways Correct article usage
the same
such
as gender, skin colour, beauty and financial status. Linking Words
Human
are social Fix the agreement mistake
Humans
creature
, we try to stay in Fix the agreement mistake
creatures
group
and judge what we think they are different. Add an article
a group
the group
At
the early century, Gays and Change preposition
In
Lady boys
are diagnosed Correct your spelling
Ladyboys
as
mental Change preposition
with
illness
. Disables are treated as Fix the agreement mistake
illnesses
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second class
. Add a hyphen
second-class
Therefore
, Linking Words
these attitude
and Change the determiner
this attitude
these attitudes
behaviors
were Change the spelling
behaviours
transferd
through generations. Another issue is that they want to be accepted by their friends and gangsters as I Correct your spelling
transferred
was
mentioned that Unnecessary verb
apply
human
are Fix the agreement mistake
humans
social
Add an article
a social
creature
. They want to be cool and want Fix the agreement mistake
creatures
to
Change preposition
apply
dominant
others. Recently, Replace the word
dominate
a news
provided information that one popular actor used to Remove the article
news
a piece of news
made
fun of his friends including disabled people. At that time, he was hot at school, Change the verb form
make
however
after Linking Words
this
news Linking Words
spreaded
, he was banned by his Correct your spelling
spread
fanclubs
.
In order to tackle Correct your spelling
fan clubs
this
problem, there are a number of effective solutions. Linking Words
First
of all, Linking Words
schools
should set rules to make students equal even Use synonyms
they
are rich or poor. Correct word choice
if they
For example
, Linking Words
schools
should have their own student uniforms in order to let children look the same. The Use synonyms
next
way out is Linking Words
educate
these adolescents. Let them know which are good and bad things. Having lessons for new era norms and cultures. After doing these things, students would know the Fix the infinitive
to educate
different
Replace the word
difference
of
Change preposition
in
this
world and accept each other the way they are.
In conclusion, Linking Words
this
essay examined two concerns resulting from the Linking Words
children'behaviour
of bullying at Correct your spelling
children behaviour
children behavior
schools
; people are not equal, Use synonyms
Correct word choice
and human
human
want to be accepted. To tackle the Fix the agreement mistake
humans
first
, the solution is for Linking Words
schools
to set their own rules. To address the latter, it is advised that Use synonyms
schools
should educate their student.Use synonyms
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