Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? (12GT-1; Vinoth M A) 11/01/21
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
It is often said that people usually spend their spare time with their coworkers, whereas others enjoy their privacy after work. Both sides have different advantages and drawbacks. From my perspective, I partially agree with this notion and will elaborate on it in the following paragraphs.
In recent years, many people have migrated from their rural hometowns to the capital cities, hoping to find better opportunities. This has sparked debate about which lifestyle—urban or rural—is preferable. From my perspective, both city and rural living have their own advantages and disadvantages, which will be discussed below.
It is important to understand why many people around the world prefer hiring a personal trainer over attending group classes. This essay will explore two key reasons behind this trend and discuss the impact it has on individuals.
There are some people who believe that environmental issues should be addressed on a international level while others argue that national solutions are more appropriate. In my view, despite some environmental problems being related to the way each country functions, it affects all human beings and should be solved at a worldwide scale.
Travelling has become really popular in the last decade. The Low-cost airlines have opened the opportunity to travel abroad and to discover new places for more people. In this essay, I would like to discuss the different issues that this opening of borders may have created.