Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? (12GT-1; Vinoth M A) 11/01/21
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
As the pace of today's materialistic society moves on, a multitude of people fail to achieve work-life balance. Several consequences may be listed about this phenomenon and devising a solution necessitates a concerted endeavour of everybody.
While it is widely claimed that numerous manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which leading to several health problems, others argue that those sugary products should be made more expensive aiming to encourage people to take less sugar. The reason why I disagree with the statement will be elaborated on in this essay.
While some hold the idea that becoming older is backward in these days and ages, others believe there are upsides to getting ageing. This essay will discuss both two notions and figure out factors differing them.
Bussinesses have always sought to make a profit but it becomes increasingly common to hear that bussinesses have social obligations. I completely agree with with businesses should contribute more towards social responsibility than making money. In the coming paragraphs, I will enlighten you about it.
Spending money on a few expensive Shirts, trousers or skirts is better than spending money on cheaper clothes. This essay agrees with this point of view because expensive clothes might have better quality that does not affect the skin and lasts longer.