Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? (12GT-1; Vinoth M A) 11/01/21
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
First of all, I want to congratulate you and your family on your new home. I hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter regarding my recent trip to your new house.
According to some parents, reading entertainment books is a waste of time for children. These parents believe that children should only read serious and educational books. I completely disagree with this viewpoint because reading entertainment books improves the imaginative power of children, and children get some entertainment by reading these books.
I took my PC to your store 4 days ago on Tuesday and had it fixed for a charge of $20. However, I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the service I received from a particular technician.
Spreading technology is completely common through this generation and these days number of people have access to all sorts of technologies such as computers and phones. The function of this development is people are able to work from their homes and this occurrence has its own advantages and disadvantages. I will discuss both sides and give relevant examples.
A large proportion of animals are on the brink of extinction. While governments and organisations are doing their utmost to reverse the trend, some claim that doing so is a wrongful use of public funds and resources, which strongly contradicts my personal standpoint.