Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? (12GT-1; Vinoth M A) 11/01/21
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
Over time number of habitats around the world has increased drastically which raised the voices of experts who are afraid of the depletion of supplies and natural resources on the earth.In my humble opinion,I think that overpopulation is a very critical problem,which has side effects that can not be easily managed.
The issue of crime resonates deeply with many individuals. While some attribute criminal behavior to inherent flaws in individuals, others including myself believe that it primarily stems from poverty and social challenges.
Nowadays, it has been known that all cutting-edge technology incredibly are developing. Some argue that advanced science must be addressed to elevate human lives. Besides, the approach has to take into account societal issues, I personally believe that improved knowledge should be considered to improve environmental conditions.
In the present, it is undeniable that famous persons tend to share their personal opinions on public issues more often. In my view, participating in public matters has positive impacts in terms of raising awareness and supporting freedom of speech, all of which will be discussed in this essay.