Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? (12GT-1; Vinoth M A) 11/01/21
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
The importance of sports which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy over its potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, I agree extreme sports should have regulations but disagree with a complete ban. This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
It must be accepted that nowadays, there has been a significant increase in the usage of plastic bags, bottles and packaging worldwide. It impacts negatively the environment. There are many reasons we should avoid such plastic products. Therefore, few initiatives must be taken by governments and individuals to solve this problem to a large extent.
The burgeoning prevalence of digital currencies in contemporary times has been striking. This essay explores the catalysts propelling the ascent of virtual currencies and asserts that this trend constitutes an adverse progression, precipitating a surge in cybercrimes and financial instability.
It is true that rich countries often provide financial aid to poorer countries, but this does not always solve the problem of poverty. I believe that while money can help, it is not enough on its own, and developed countries should offer other types of support to help poor nations more effectively.
Organisations worldwide spend a huge sum of money on the promotion of their products to make customers buy them. Although ads inform about good-quality items, their frequent appearance can be distracting to purchasers.