Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? (12GT-1; Vinoth M A) 11/01/21
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
There is no denying the fact that since Covid-19, online education has become popular among people. While it is commonly believed that many students prefer online study to face-to-face education, there are also arguments against this idea. This essay will analyze the topic from both points of view and express my opinion.
Some would say that consumers are loaded by a growing number of commercials from different companies, which produce the same products and services. This essay totally agrees with that statement because advertisers persuade people to buy products and services by emphasizing them as a status symbol and playing on inner fears and insecurities. To avoid being influenced by advertising, focus on needs and mindfulness should be considered.
Globalization is undeniably fostering a world characterized by a unified culture, contributing to the erosion of national identities - according to some. This essay concurs with the notion that globalization plays a pivotal role in shaping a homogenous global culture while diminishing distinctive national identities.