Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?
With the rapid development of automobile manufacturing, the number of
vehicles
has significantly increased these days. Due to sufficient car
provision, we can transport people
and goods easily, but the traffic jam is getting worse. The aim of this
essay is to explore the cause of car
supply and elucidate some measures that government have to take.
First
of all, It is an undeniable fact that over several decades there seems a considerable increase in private vehicles
along with free trade and the enhancement of technology in environmentally friendly cars
. There are some profitable car
companies in Korea, and we are willing to have agreements with other nations where there are no car
production facilities, in return
they could import their products to us Add a comma
,return
such
as agricultural goods. Through this
process, we can easily export our cutting-edge cars
everywhere. Besides
, the recent advancement of eco-friendly motors such
as hydrogen-fueled or electric-powered cars
enables car
manufacturers to produce as many as cars
possible over three decades. These factors instigate people
to have their own vehicles
which ultimately leads to massive traffic volumes.
If so, what should we do to prevent deteriorating our road conditions ? Most of all, it is urgently requested that the government should enact a law so that people
can no longer contribute to the worsening traffic situation. Additionally
, the administration should provide public transport and facilities as much as possible so that people
can take buses and subways anywhere. For example
, there are many express trains in Seoul at the moment, and they have plans to supply more express tubes and even boats in the river. These efforts will lead to alleviating time and money on the roads which results
in reducing social costs. On top of the efforts of municipal organizations, all citizens must join together by carpooling.
To sum up, it is apparently evident that Change the verb form
result
people
feel comfortable due to the stable supply of cars
. However
, all roads are full of vehicles
, so it reversely gives us an adverse effect. The government and all citizens should work together to improve our lives in order to pass down good life quality to the next
generations.Submitted by seonkorea on
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