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Today, food travels thousands of miles from the farm to the consumer. why is this? Is it positive or negative trend?

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There is an ongoing discussion regarding deciding the range of salaries.A group of individuals claims that it is beneficial for a country that its employers have high standard salaries.While some others think that it has more demerits and the government should control the salaries of workers.As far as I am concerned, I totally believe that the economy plays a vital role in the development of the nation.I would like to hold the primary opinion. About discussion will show the pros and cons.
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, In my ,opinion your bank balance is your strength.If you have strong money
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 it will boost your status
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 will be beneficial for the country.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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