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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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There are various genres of
music
 in the globe nowadays
such
 as Jazz and rap songs.
This
 essay will show us the importance of
music
 to human beings
such
 as an aid in reducing
stress
, and the old-fashioned
music
 of someone's native land is more valuable regarding
this
 matter, other than global melody which is spread worldwide these days.
Music
 is a vitally needed thing worldwide for entertaining the human mind, due to its rhythm, melody, and harmony. Today we need it more than in the past because of the heavy burden and pressures an individual is facing from society. It will cause stressful events for the person which may lead to the unhealthiness of his mind. So,
music
 stimulates one's brain cells and helps him to reduce
stress
.
For example
, a study has shown that relaxing songs can lower an individual's blood pressure and heart rate which may reduce
stress
. From ancient times,
music
 is used to entertain people and people used
music
 to express their thoughts and emotions which leads to it, being a universal language. But
on the contrary
, the new generation's songs withdraw the calmness of the mind and make it more arrogant.
This
 will lead to stressful, mentally unhealthy younger generations which will affect the existence of a healthy society. One clear example is that studies have shown listening to aggressive melodies can induce feelings of aggressiveness and can
also
 trigger the fight-to-fight response. In conclusion, we need
music
 to calm our minds and reduce our
stress
 levels. To do so, our local
music
 is far more valuable than global
music
.
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