Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown

The charts above describe the

result

of a survey about education for adults. As we can see, these charts provide information about the reason for taking a

study

and

percentage

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the percentage

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of sharing adult education costs. For the

first

chart, we can see that most adults take part in the

study

because

of

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they are interested in the subject. The

second

reason

of

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for

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deciding to

study

is to gain qualification followed by 38% of the

result

. Not only

those reason

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that reason

those reasons

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, some participants believe that

take

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taking

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part in the advanced

study

will help them

for

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in

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their current job.

This

result

is emphasized by

22

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the 22

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% of participants

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who chosen

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chosen

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that answer. For improving prospects of promotion and enjoying learning, those ideas have the same percentage which is about 20% shown in the chart. The lowest number of

participant

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participants

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think that meeting people is the aim of deciding to

study

. For the

second

chart, we can see that most of the participants, about 40%, believe that each course should be shared

through

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the individual

an individual

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individual

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individually

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.

However

, around 25% and 35% of the

result

describes that the course should

be share

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be shared

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with the taxpayer and employer.