Presently we can highlight that there is a rise in
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of violence on television and it has
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impact on
children
's
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. I totally agree with
this
statement because
cruelty
on
TV
can lead
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to
demolishingChange the verb form
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mentalCorrect article usage
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health of
children
and
children
are Unnecessary verb
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able to grow up as
criminals
.
Initially
, observing
cruelty
. on
TV
have
badCorrect article usage
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impact on
children
's psychology or ever they can become
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psycho.
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to
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psychology
children
's brain is not already established, they
information
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such Correct quantifier usage
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a straight way.
Hence
, their psychology is very weak and have a chance to get
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impact from each bad picture or
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on the street.
For instance
, the fact that adults who suffer from
such
mental issues were watching
cruelty
on
TV
or another source. The amount of money spent on
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sessionFix the agreement mistake
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is increasing every year and even after
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therapist'sFix the agreement mistake
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some issues don't vanish.
Secondly
, sadism watched on
TV
is prior key to
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a cruel person or even
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a criminal in future. Representing harsh scenes
byChange preposition
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aChange the article
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accident on
TV
may lead to
children
's way of growth and some bad
implicationFix the agreement mistake
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could be inevitable. As
aChange the article
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example,
theCorrect article usage
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big amount of
criminals
became
criminals
by
the Remove the article
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some Correct quantifier usage
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cruelty
nested in their's childhood.
Also
for
this
sake,
childAdd an article
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who
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seenWrong verb form
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some bad stuff on
TV
stopped thriving at one
.
To conclude,
children
should watch only television for kids because
cruelty
might lead to some mental issues and contribute to
children
's growth by making them
criminals
.