Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge . To what extent is this a positive or a negative development ?
Nowadays, crime rates have increased significantly. while some citizens think that fixed discipline is better to apply than unfixed sanction.
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No one can deny that fixed beating laws help legal researchers to study criminal penalties. By doing Linking Words
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, the research will determine whether the abuse is fair for every criminal. A recent study conducted at Reading University revealed that 10% of the current imprisonment period was not enough to correct lawbreakers. Linking Words
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