Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 5.5

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Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Fully explain your ideas

The working week should be shorted and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a house with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development?

In many countries the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress. what do you think are the causes of this? can you suggest some possible solutions?