Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, abd have health problems as a result. Why do man working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
Most workers do not get enough
exercise
either during the working place
or in
their Change preposition
during
relax
Replace the word
relaxation
time
, abd
have health issues eventually. Correct your spelling
and
This
essay will first
suggest working people who do not get enough exercises
in the working Fix the agreement mistake
exercise
place
and what could be done for
Change preposition
about
this
issue.
The most vital thing in the working place
is doing your job in
Change preposition
on
time
and it leads to pressure and low
possibility to Add an article
the low
a low
exercise
. Working hard is one of the crucial thing
in many people's Change to a plural noun
things
career
but Fix the agreement mistake
careers
also
that
means spending too much Correct pronoun usage
apply
time
over
some projects without physical movement. Change preposition
on
Moreover
, lack of exercise
in the working place
will be the couse
of serious health problems in the future. Correct your spelling
cause
For instance
, most people who works
in the office have overweight problems which sooner or later Change the verb form
work
leads
to Correct subject-verb agreement
lead
heart
attack.
To avoid Add an article
a heart
lack
of productivity and physical activity in the workplace employers should give their staff more Correct article usage
a lack
time
to do their job perfectly right on time
. If employees have their own time
management, they will be able to exercise
after work. Therefore
, doing exercise
in the working place
would raise workers
Change noun form
workers'
worker's
mood
and increase their productivity in any project. Fix the agreement mistake
moods
For example
, in Japan
some offices have Add a comma
,Japan
exercise
time
for their workers, and without exercising they don't allow employees to work.
In conclusion, doing exercise
in the working place
is one of the most important thing
to do , as our health is counting on it. Change to a plural noun
things
However
, not all of us figure it out yet.Submitted by sherzod5574485 on
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