Some parents prefer to have their children be raised by their grandparents. Some prefer to raise them on their own. Which would you prefer & why?. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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might better rise their own

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youth is the complete opposite. In my opinion, is always better to spend as much as it is possible with the child, especially at a young age.

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, old folk who have one or more grown adults as their sons or

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have more experience, which can be gainful for the newborn. There are two main reasons why I would choose to rise the child by myself or with my wife.

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of all, watching the

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step or being able to hear the

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word that came out of my child's

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, is generally wonderful. Those are moments in life which are impossible to forget,

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it is said that every parent should be

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to a baby when

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a situation is happening.

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might have not as much energy as they used to have when they were younger. Babysitting during the whole day can be exhausting, and elderly people have to take a nap or two, and

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behaviour is forbidden because kids can be in danger at any time.

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, the ages of young

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can be different. Some of them are really young,

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, 23 or even younger. In the situation when

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a guardian is not responsible enough, the grandparent should be

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duty to rise that baby. What is more, old people are more patient than young. And it is clear that in the contact with a small

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the amount of that asset is enormous and well required. In conclusion, there are positive as well as negative sides to keeping children near with

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, not with

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, the number of advantages

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the disadvantages.

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is why the kid should be almost always with their mother and father.