Some people think that tourists should follow the traditional customs of the host country. Do you agree or disagree?

Presently, a sizable group believes that local
traditions
and
customs
should be complied
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not neglected by overseas
travelers
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. In
this
essay, I will give
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reason
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why I concur with
this
statement.
Firstly
, I will explore how local
traditions
can
assit
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assist
to learn more about culture, and
secondly
, I will consider
conrecte
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concrete
laws
related to
customs
.
To begin
with, the era of globalization has led to
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the
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tourist industries
wordwide
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worldwide
and
constant
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exchange of cultures.
Furthermore
, plenty of tourists tend to want to explore specific native
customs
and
traditions
that
strictly
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different from their cultures,
subsequently
, these states have to preserve their untouched
customs
from
trevelers
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travellers
.
For example
, African nations have unique places where primary rites and household
traditions
have been saved by local individuals, and If people there did not conserve them,
then
tourists would not get to know and see these
customs
. As well as
this
, the
laws
in various cultural groups are different and must be followed and respected by everyone.
Furthermore
, loads of
laws
are connected with ancient
customs
and for local
people
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it is an integral part of their communities.
For instance
, conserved Arabic countries have
laws
compeling
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compelling
all women whether
tourist
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tourists
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or
local
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locals
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wear
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a hidjab
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hidjab
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hijab
that
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is
wierd
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for other states, which do not have
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faith. In conclusion, it seems clear that local
customs
should be preserved and respected by every state around the world due to unique cultures, which can see other generations.
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