Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space. Others argue they should spend the money for poor people. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
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the goverment
goverment
must devote funds to space exploration. whereas, some Correct your spelling
government
peple
argue that the federal authorities should spend money in order to tackle poverty. Correct your spelling
people
although
it is important to dedicate resourses
to Correct your spelling
resources
explore
the galaxy, I believe that Wrong verb form
exploring
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the goverment
goverment
has to pay attention to supporting Correct your spelling
government
under
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privilaged
citizens.
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privileged
one
hand, one
of the aims of exploring the
space is to find Correct article usage
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pout
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out
wether
is it possible to find other planets to live Correct your spelling
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or
not. it is forecasted Change preposition
on or
thath
the earth might be Correct your spelling
that
unhabitate
in about a decade Correct your spelling
inhabitants
as a result
of an environmental castrophe
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a global scale which is caused by Change preposition
on
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waste, air Correct your spelling
toxic
poloution
, carbon footprint and climate Correct your spelling
pollution
crisis
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crises
such
as changing water patterns and temprature
soar. Correct your spelling
temperature
temperatures
therefor
it sounds vital to look for other Correct your spelling
Therefore
habitates
in the cosmos. for Correct your spelling
habitats
instancr
, NASA has sent Correct your spelling
instance
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a couriosity
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rover to mars to search for Correct your spelling
curiosity
watter
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water
suppplies
on Correct your spelling
supplies
this
palnet
.
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planet
on the other hand
, it is one
of the key responsibilities of the goverment
to introduce regulations to improve welfare in Correct your spelling
government
the
society. Correct article usage
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one
of the paramaunt
steps to reach Correct your spelling
paramount
this
goal is ti
target poverty by offering Correct your spelling
to
offering
money, shelter and health support to poor households. Remove the redundancy
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sdditionaly
it is ethical to help Correct your spelling
Additionally
low income
families in order to prevent them Add a hyphen
low-income
suffering
from hunger, illness, lack of education or being homeless.
in conclusion, launching Change preposition
from suffering
spacecrafts
, Correct your spelling
spacecraft
voyagers
and investigating Correct word choice
and voyagers
on
space exploration can be important. Change preposition
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however
, i
would say that Change the capitalization
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aithirities
should Correct your spelling
authorities
consuder
fighting Correct your spelling
consider
with
poverty as a target and spend money on that.Change preposition
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