Some people say that every human being can create art, for example painting. Others think only the people born with the ability can create art. Discuss both view and give your opinion?

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been debates about inborn talents versus skills acquired through
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since the beginning of time. Some are of the belief that artistic talents are something that a person was born with, whereas others think that it’s something that can be achieved through determined training and
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hard work
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hard work
and
talent
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that exist around us proving that being born with a special skill is
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foreign to some people.
For instance
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shows
such
as America’s Got
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, you can’t help but be amazed by the innate
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possess at
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a young age. It’s no wonder why the
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, Mozart comes to our mind when we think of music, or Einstein when we talk about the geniuses of the world. They are gifted with that
talent
. They certainly have more natural aptitude than others in certain areas.
On the other hand
, anyone can produce
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practice
and training. If
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Been the case, there would never have existed
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schools and arts as subjects in many schools and universities. One may not produce
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piece
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of
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on their
first
day of
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a couple of months but with continued
practice
and perseverance, they can certainly accomplish works that they thought they ever could.
For example
, when
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a beautiful
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of
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we tend to believe that the person who created that would be gifted. We ignore the fact that they might have
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a long journey of
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hard work
yard work
to get there. In my opinion, even
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people with innate
talent
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to work on their skills to figure out how much they are capable of. |Even the most talented can lead
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of oblivion if they don’t polish their
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continued
practice
.
Conversely
], anyone with passion and determination can create unique pieces of
art
. To sum up,
both
talent
and
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hard work
have a role in creating
art
.
Both
are inextricably linked.
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, on balance, I believe that
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of
art
is not limited to any particular individual.
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