Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is currently a major controversy over the issue of whether the depletion of certain

creatures

species

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is the leading plight in

this

day and age ,or not in lieu of that individuals are confronted

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more environmentally prominent challenges. I am among those who are under the impression that centring the attention on

species

elimination would lead to solving a plethora of environmental-based predicaments and in

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essay I will elaborate on both sides' perspectives as well as my own. To commence with at

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glance, some public

ponder

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that the loss of

species

plays a central role in

conditions

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of the milieu, and I agree. The fundamental reason is that the mass destruction of

creatures

and

species

has plagued the natural processes of ecosystems, which on its own paves the way for more extinction of others time after time.

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weather and the earth's medium is to a great extent stemming from detrimental changes in the ecosystem of living habitat.

consequently

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notion that most of the tight spots in

environment

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environmental

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conditions are rooted in mass obsolescence, finding a solution to

this

can surmount many other problems in succession. Be that as it may, it is often conceived that it is better if society

make

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efforts to tackle other environmental crises which have more significance for

this

settlement. Admittedly, by developing the industries and the modernization of city lives,

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planet the earth is exposed to various dangers as much as

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habitat has reached a point where there is no room for complacency or just focusing on other

creatures

' lives, whereas humans' survival condition is in dire danger.

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,

as a result

of the industrial revolution and other alterations in people's lifestyle, the member of the public are struggling with diversified troubles

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as

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air and soil pollution, the population bomb, running out of fossil fuels, exhausting unsustainable resources, famine, desertification, and many others. defusing these crises is

such

paramount that just regarding and focusing on

species

extinction as the major problem is not attainable and possible. To recapitulate, while people may vary in their opinions, I maintain the fact

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incompatible changes in the ecosystem

such

as the extinction of living

creatures

have a far-reaching impact on the environment, disregarding other parameters or

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them negligible is concomitant to ever-increasing ecosystem-based predicaments.