In many parts of the world, families were larger in the past because people had more children. Do you think there were more advantages or disadvantages to being part of a large family in the past? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
having a big family was common, In
last
two hundred years ago. Families
used to tend to believe that when they have more children that will give them a lot
of advantages.In my opinion, A big family were and is and will be good for several reasons.
Firstly
, Big families
tend to last
for several generations.For
example
, wars killed a lot
of people
and families
who were big and sure will last
for more years and small families
disappear quickly. In addition
, diseases do the same effects and even more .For ,example
Checkbox kill around A Hundred million in 1900. Big families
were saved and lived longer. This
is the most advantage that I believe help people
to live until now. We have to be glad because of what the big family did for us.
secondly
, having many members of families
lead to gaining a lot
of economic advantages.For
example
, if I have many brothers and sisters we can do a lot
of business together without having people
in our family .May I can grow vegetables and my family help me by selling them and the others cook them or exporting this
product outside of our country.The huge income we will gain if we have a big family and fewer work hours we work .
To sum up, the government should support people
to have a lot
of children and encourage them in any way by setting a law because that will have a lot
of many political and economic benefits for the country . India for
example
has the strongest economy due to its population's number.Submitted by saeedra358 on
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