Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

Many societies around the world believe that formal examinations are the best
way
to know a
student
's
performance
and
ability
in their studies. But they speak that continual assessments
such
as coursework and homework are not a perfect
way
to replace them. In my opinion, continual assessments
such
as coursework and project are not a satisfactory
way
to evaluate students.
Teachers
and parents around us believe that formal examinations like mid-term exams and final exams are the only
way
to know students'
ability
to do their life work. But some insist that it is not the only
way
to assess a
student
's
performance
.
For example
, most elderly
teachers
agree that formal examination is the only
way
to assess a
student
's
ability
so they hold an exam to evaluate their children and young
teachers
believe that it is not the only
way
to evaluate them. But there is an advanced
way
to assess a
performance
these days. In Korea, there is a course named "evaluating each other". Each peer in a classroom can evaluate the others. They can classify each other with the predicted score, A, B, C and D. After scoring classmates, explain the reason is necessary.
Teachers
will make a final decision to score them after "evaluating each other" is finished. In conclusion, classifying a
student
's
ability
with formal examinations is not a perfect
way
to assess a
student
's
performance
, and continual assessments
such
as coursework, project and homework cannot replace it. The best
way
to assess each
student
's
performance
is using the "evaluating each other". Each classmate can motivate themselves by evaluating each other.
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