some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangered species while others think it is a waste of money. what is your opinion?

Spending money
on
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to take care of
animanls
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animals
which are at the edge of
extintion
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extinction
is a topic considered by some people and others believe
this
is just a
wastage
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. Since the beginning of the earth to
this
date
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each and every
species
are a core part of
nature
and playing role in balancing
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the eco-system
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eco-system
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ecosystem
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,
therfore
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therefore
to keep
this
cycle stabilize
humen
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human
need to focus more on endangered
animals
.
Firstly
,
species
are a vital part of
earth
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which includes a tiny
worm
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worms
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in soil
sufface
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surface
suffice
to whale in
a
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blue sea as important members. They start every day with
the
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list of activities which
is
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crucial for our
nature
,
therefore
everything can go normally without
interuption
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interruption
interaction
. For an instance, polar bears are almost extinct due to climate change and for
this
the effect on
the
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nature
is huge.
Therefore
scientist has been carrying
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out reseach
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reseach
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research
on
this
rare
species
and came up with some good news as well. What will happen if
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a scientist
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scientist
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scientists
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could not find out any hope for
this
? Yes, there
is
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chances to bring positive results and there were some positive things done in the past. Trying with sorely
believe
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and effort can do to save the
species
.
Secondly
,
variety
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of endangered
species
are
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not rare. Due to different reasons day by
day
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different types of
animals
are
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facing
threat
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the threat
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of extinction. As mentioned
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in different
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different
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reasons one of the main reasons above all
are
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deforestation and
environment
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pollution for which humans are only to be blamed
for
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.
Therefore
this
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these
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are
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the humans who need to come forward to protect these
endanged
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endangered
animals
with
a
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intesive
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intensive
project.
As without
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ecological
balace
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balance
human
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humans
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would
also
face
theat
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that
the
threat
after some time. To sum up money
to
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spent
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on endangered
animals
is the only way to save
nature
and to save us.
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