some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangered species while others think it is a waste of money. what is your opinion?
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on
to take care of Change preposition
apply
animanls
which are at the edge of Correct your spelling
animals
extintion
is a topic considered by some people and others believe Correct your spelling
extinction
this
is just a Linking Words
wastage
. Since the beginning of the earth to Replace the word
waste
this
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date
each and every Add a comma
,date
species
are a core part of Use synonyms
nature
and playing role in balancing Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the eco-system
eco-system
, Correct your spelling
ecosystem
therfore
to keep Correct your spelling
therefore
this
cycle stabilize Linking Words
humen
need to focus more on endangered Correct your spelling
human
animals
.
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, Linking Words
species
are a vital part of Use synonyms
earth
which includes a tiny Add an article
the earth
worm
in soil Fix the agreement mistake
worms
sufface
to whale in Correct your spelling
surface
suffice
a
blue sea as important members. They start every day with Correct article usage
the
the
list of activities which Correct article usage
a
is
crucial for our Correct subject-verb agreement
are
nature
, Use synonyms
therefore
everything can go normally without Linking Words
interuption
. For an instance, polar bears are almost extinct due to climate change and for Correct your spelling
interruption
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the effect on Linking Words
the
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apply
nature
is huge. Use synonyms
Therefore
scientist has been carrying Linking Words
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out reseach
reseach
on Correct your spelling
research
this
rare Linking Words
species
and came up with some good news as well. What will happen if Use synonyms
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a scientist
scientist
could not find out any hope for Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
this
? Yes, there Linking Words
is
chances to bring positive results and there were some positive things done in the past. Trying with sorely Change the verb form
are
believe
and effort can do to save the Replace the word
belief
species
.
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Secondly
, Linking Words
variety
of endangered Correct article usage
a variety
species
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are
not rare. Due to different reasons day by Change the verb form
is
day
different types of Add a comma
,day
animals
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are
facing Change the verb form
is
threat
of extinction. As mentioned Add an article
the threat
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in different
different
reasons one of the main reasons above all Change the word
differently
are
deforestation and Change the verb form
is
environment
pollution for which humans are only to be blamedReplace the word
environmental
for
. Change preposition
apply
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this
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these
are
the humans who need to come forward to protect these Change the verb form
is
endanged
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endangered
animals
with Use synonyms
a
Change the article
an
intesive
project. Correct your spelling
intensive
As without
ecological Change preposition
Without
balace
Correct your spelling
balance
human
would Fix the agreement mistake
humans
also
face Linking Words
theat
after some time.
To sum up money Correct your spelling
that
the
threat
to
Change preposition
apply
spent
on endangered Change the form of the verb
spend
animals
is the only way to save Use synonyms
nature
and to save us.Use synonyms
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