You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email ·give details of the purchase ·describe the problem ·explain why you need a replacement urgently

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to let you know that my disappointment with my recent purchase from your online shop. As I am a regular customer of your shopping application,I did order new winter shoes for me which has been showing on your site.

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, the specifications given on the site were satisfactory and mentioned brand name was Nike. SHNI0023 is the order number given by you.

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, my foot size is UK-6, and I have ordered the same. But,

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I could not receive the appropriate pair of shoes and the brand

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was not the original Nike. It seems to be the

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copy of the original product.

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, I accept the problem but I would like to replace my order at the earliest of your convenience.Since the winter season started, it has been difficult to survive without shoes. I would be grateful if you consider my concern and do the replacement process at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Asha

ashakiranbhavsarSat Jan 14 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

165 words

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