Some people believe that music should be taught in school, while others think that it is best to focus on science and computer. Do you agree or Disagree?

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Recently, people have been debating if musical education should be part of the school curriculum or if other subjects,
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as science and technology, are more important. I agree that music should be learned at school and,
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, a lot can be taught through melody, even content from other subjects, like mathematics or literature.
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happens because rhythm and melody help memorization.
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, if the teacher makes a song about the multiplication table, the students will be more able to memorize it faster. It
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has benefits in regard to communication and socialization. According to researchers, when we try to synch with others musically (keeping the beat or harmonizing,
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) we tend to feel positive social feelings towards those with whom we are synchronizing, even if that person is not visible to us or not in the same room.
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, studying melody alters the brain structure and improves abilities
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as reading, verbal memory and audition. Another interesting fact is that it improves neuroplasticity, which is the capacity of the brain to recover from any kind of lesion.
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, if a child loses the ability to listen, the brain will use neuroplasticity to adapt to the situation and start looking for other stimuli
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listening. In conclusion, I personally defend that music should be taught in school, considering the many benefits it brings,
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as the improvement of memorizing and neuroplasticity in the intellect.
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