In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantage of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantage?

Self-driving vehicles have been a
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topic recently in our society. Certain people think that technology allows
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to travel without a driver in a near future,
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will produce lower traffic accidents, reduced stress and enjoy the road.
Nonetheless
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a lot of problems in driving in the cities, villages and towns. In
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both points of view along with my personal opinion. On the one hand, driving
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vehicles are being driven less due to traffic
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increased dramatically, above all, in large cities.
In addition
, deaths by cars accident have augmented too so
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leads us to think
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may be the solution. Technology has reached
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are available for
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in
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different
countries.
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, these cars will decrease accidents
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streets,
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highways, etc.
furthermore
, these technological improvements bring
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a car
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car
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with lower pollution helping the environment in our community. Another perk, automatics trucks will permit to drivers spent their time in other activities rather than driving, even they will capable to learn
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or other skills they want.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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