You have decided to go on a holiday to a foreign country for 2 weeks, and you want one of your friends to go with you. Write a letter to your friend asking him to accompany you, in your letter, - Explain where and when you want to go - Give details of the travel, dates and costs involved - Describe some of the things you want to do

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Dear Sarah, I have recently been provided with a trip to the USA for 2 weeks, as a token of appreciation for all the hard work by my company, and I can choose someone to go with me.

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, some of the travel plans are, we will start from Ontario on the 3rd of June, and return back on the 19th of the same month. We will be arriving at Los Angeles airport on the 4th of June, where we will stay for 3 days and

then

drive to San Francisco by road on the 6th. I have booked a flight from SFO airport to Newyork on the 8th and after a ,stay for 3 days in NY , the city we will be flying to Florida where our trip ends. So, the only money we will be needing is for spending as the travel, stay and food will be covered by the company. Some things I would like to do when we arrive in the USA are, visit the Universal studios of LA, and the most spoken Route 1 drive from Los Angeles to San Francisco. Of course, when in New York how can one miss the seven wonders of the world, the Statue of Liberty and the happening downtown of Manhattan which includes the Times Square visit

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It would be great if you can add some more fun activities to

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trip, as you have previously been there in the United States for 2 years to complete your Master's. I would be waiting to hear a positive answer from you soon. Best regards, Varsha.

Submitted by varshar1612 on Sun Jan 15 2023

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

266 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Many customs and traditional ways of behaviour are no longer relevant to modern life and not worth keeping. Do you agree or disagree?

some people believe that it is good to share much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic wirld.Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

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