There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children, Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couple who decide to do this.

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getting bigger since a bunch of
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stated their point of view to not have a baby.
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their follower. Here the essay will explain more regarding
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and merit of
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that follow the statement. The benefit by
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children,
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of the example they will not become a parent that should pay the cost of school.
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, they can focus on their career goal and treat better their wife or husband.
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without any consideration
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everywhere anytime.
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people
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lonely in
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old age.
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boring and stuck for some reason.
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of having
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, no one will take care of them when they are getting older like the other family. To
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up the discussion, the better decision is
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a baby and
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them well. As
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can not live without
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, a couple should think twice before they totally agree to not have
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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