Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People
have different views about whether children
should be taught to be competitive or co-operative
. Correct your spelling
cooperative
While
a spirit of competition can sometimes be useful in life
, I believe that the ability to co-operate is more important. On the one hand, competition can be a great source of motivation for children
. When teachers use games or prizes to introduce an element of competitiveness into lessons, it can encourage children
to work harder to outdo the other pupils in the class. This
kind of healthy rivalry may help to build children
’s self-confidence while
pushing them to work independently and progress more quickly. When these children
leave school, their confidence and determination will help them in competitive situations such
as job interviews. It can therefore
be argued that competition should be encouraged in order to prepare children
for adult life
. On the other hand
, it is perhaps even more important to prepare children
for the many aspects of adult life
that require cooperation. In the workplace, adults are expected to work in teams, follow instructions given by their superiors or supervise and support the more junior members of staff. Team collaboration skills are much more useful than a competitive determination to win. This
is the attitude that I believe schools should foster in young people
. Instead
of promoting the idea that people
are either winners or losers, teachers could show children
that they gain more from working together. In conclusion, I can understand why people
might want to encourage competitiveness in children
, but it seems to me that a cooperative attitude is much more desirable in adult life
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