Some people sat that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, remaining in business

competitions

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is determined by different circumstances. One of them is sufficient

advertisments

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advertisements

.

However

, there are

opponent

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opinions about

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their efficiency

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of them because of too much usage.

This

is a debatable topic which is needed to argue. From the ancient

era

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sellers

striked

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strived

to convince customers to purchase their goods. After

industrial

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the industrial

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revolution

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advertiment

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advertisement

ways have been developed gradually, and several

researches

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pieces of research

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investigated how these modes could be improved,

for example

, investigations suggest that shoppers are likely to buy a household good which

as

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a familiar name and appearance

instead

of the unknown one.

This

might be because of being exposed to

uncontious

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unconscious

effects in long term. So, advocates of

advertiment

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advertisement

efficiency refer to the mentioned studies. They offer businessmen new opportunities

such

as social media as the modern

bilboards

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billboards

billboard

. So, bloggers who have accumulated plenty of followers could be

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reasonable choices. Whereas

on the other hand

, some people believe that

advertiments

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advertisements

lost their previous influence. They

insists

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on some drawbacks

such

as extreme competition for repleting the cities with posters which become invisible after a while.

For instance

, some studies indicate that the brain

deny

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denies

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too much information in long term.

Hence

, the money spent for publishing these data is wasted in the end.

Besides

, people complain of mandatory facing

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frequent commercial icons wherever they go from the city walls to

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of trains.

Therefore

, the opponents of the

first

viewpoint believe that

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up to the minute, advertisements act against themselves. To conclude, it seems that

although

there are disadvantages related to how

commericial

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commercial

things are presented, the obvious merits of continuous advertising are much more, and could be expanded.