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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The given maps illustrate the alternation that southwest airport go through in the
next
 year. Overall, the main changes that will
happened
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 after a year
is
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 in the northern layout which
gates
 will
increased
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increase
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 from a low of 8
gates
 to a high of 18.
In addition
, some new buildings will be added,
such
 as sky train, car hire section, ATM and bag drop sector. As can be seen from the
site
 plan, there
is
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 8
gates
 with just
little
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 space for
walkway
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a walkway
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 in the current
site
, while there will be a vast Y shape area with 18
gates
 and the sky train in the middle of it in the new
site
.
Besides
, it will be added
a
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the
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 shop
center
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centre
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 on the left side, above the security section.
Although
,
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 the security and passport control area will be unchanged, as well as
customs
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the customs
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center
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centre
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, departures and arrivals will change significantly.
Check in
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senter
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centre
 will be transferred to the right and
bag
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the bag
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 drop will be replaced.
On the other hand
,
café
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the café
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 will rise from
one
 on the right top of the salon to the two shops,
one
 on the bottom left corner and
one
 on the right top corner. ATM and car hire sections will be built in the new
site
, and the departures and arrivals will have two
gates
 compared to
one
 door in the current
site
.
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