Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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number of

museums

require payment for entrance, while some of them are free of charge. I think the benefits of charging a fee,

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as being the source of funding for

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budget and increasing people’s attentiveness towards valuables exceed the possible drawbacks it has. Admittedly, one of the main complaints from people who enjoy going to

museums

is how expensive the charges can be. The

museums

are the primary attraction for families and tourists.

Although

some discounts are provided for children, it is still highly costly to pay for multiple family members upon every visit. It is equally difficult for tourists to afford those payments, as they usually have to spend a lot of their money

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essentials,

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and transport.

Although

the fees can be considered expensive for those who visit often with family members, and those who are on a tight budget, it serves some great advantages for

museums

. Some

museums

do not receive any funding from the government;

thus

, they rely on private contributions and entrance fees. The funding they collect is spent towards the infrastructure and services they provide. Through these services,

museums

can expand the collection of their valuables which ultimately, will present a better experience for its visitors.

Furthermore

, these fees can serve as a psychological strategy inclining to be more careful towards the items in the museum. Everyone who has been to a museum has seen the “do not touch” sign in front of almost every item.

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mind can be tricked into thinking that if a visit requires money, the things that

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carries must be

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than those which are free. Damage to the historically weighted items can result in the elimination of

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heritage they convey.

Thus

, the issue of protection is bigger than the functioning of

museums

, it is a culturally crucial matter. In conclusion,

although

some

museums

can be frowned upon for their expenses, the benefits of those few dollars actually are crucial for

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experience

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and assist in protecting culturally valuable items.