In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main cause of crime? How do we deal with those causes?

It is a matter of fact that different countries in the world hold different criminality rates, and it is

also

true that those rates change dynamically depending on the conditions and societal shifts that occur. I believe that people might break the

law

for many reasons, the main reason

being

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having the opportunity to do so easily.

This

leads to proposing a solution that includes enforcing the

law

more strictly.

To begin

with, many countries function in a

way

that allows individuals to disobey the

law

and either get entirely away with it

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or get an extremely minor penalty. In Greece,

for instance

, it is very common for criminals to find ways, either

financial

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or via connections, to get released from jail

way

before they complete their initial sentence given by

jury

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.

This

can happen even if their past actions were absolutely terrible. Knowing that they will probably be able to continue their lives without heavy punishment, potential criminals will not stop due to fear of facing consequences. In order to change

this

situation, it is proposed that the government takes action to ensure that each and every lawbreaker, no matter their status or financial situation, takes the proper punishment as set by

law

. A

way

that

this

could happen would be

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adjusting the criteria with which a person can postpone, minimize or entirely avoid

jail-time

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.

This

would hopefully discourage a good portion of people from

commiting

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committing

crimes. Overall, I believe that illegal actions can occur when the thought of getting punished does not cause enough fear,

therefore

authorities should become stricter when enforcing the

law

in order to push people away from crime.

This

way

criminality rates might decrease, making society safer.