You have seen an advertisement in Australian magazines for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child write a letter # Explain why you would like this # Give detail of why you are a suitable person to employ # Say how would you spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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in response to the advertisement which you published in the Australian magazine on the 3rd of September.
First
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, As a migrating ,student I need to have a job in Australia in order to fulfil my daily needs. Since you would prefer a short-term candidate, my resume would be suitable for your terms and conditions. I am pleased to say that I would be an appropriate person for
this
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job because I have been doing a diploma in primary teachers training in Sydney.
Furthermore
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, I am learning child psychology
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as part of my curriculum. So I assure you that I could manage your child well.
Moreover
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, I would enjoy spending time with children by playing games.
However
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, If I could get free time, I would like to explore the rural life, culture and foods of Australia.
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, I would prefer to take a membership in a public library near to your home. So It would be an advantage for me to do my research. I would be grateful if you consider my interest. If you have any
further
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questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully, Asha
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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