Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are some controversial perspectives heating up a debate over criminals. While some claim that keeping the perpetrator in captivity is not the optimal way to cope with them,

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others make a statement that there are two more useful means that modify them

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society

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namely education and

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orientation. Overall, while the former is valid to some extent, I consider myself an advocate of the latter. Without a shadow of a doubt, Imprisonment seems to be an ineffective method in

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certain circumstances. To be specific, relying on

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serious extent they trigger to

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that it is vital for the government to consider the appropriate redress to them.

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, the authority had better make a fine

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misdemeanor

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misdemeanors

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such

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as pickpocketing,

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, to name a few. Its counterpart namely murdering, kidnapping or grave loss of property should be imprisoned

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society

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can become tranquil and avoid inducing people to become a criminal.

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, making

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imprisoned is not

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efficacious way. While the ineffective

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is widely acknowledged, there are a wealth of means to deal with them, especially providing

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and

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orientation. While education brings them an awareness of their mistakes in the past,

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training helps them to make money. By doing so, they will reintegrate into

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.

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, a bunch of reformatories spring up for the immature perpetrators which

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of morality and

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holders in handicraft.

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, providing awareness and

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training are two of the best ways to rehabilitate offenders. In conclusion,

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putting criminals behind bars is suitable for

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certain perpetrators, it is not an optimal method to apply on a mass scale.

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, education and

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orientation are

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effective ways to cope with them.