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Nowadays, people are spending more time away form their homes, because they spend longer in their work place. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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People are wasting the majority of their time at
work
except
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 their homes. In contemporary days. On my ,side people should regulate their time in their daily lives.
First
 of all, workers have rescheduled their day-to-day activities and they need to achieve the targets set for them. To do so , they have to extend beyond their shift timings and try to complete the
work
 assignment.
For instance
, meetings and other priority activities will make employees
work
 beyond office hours.
Likewise
, meetings are scheduled outside the regular job timings, they have to attend the same and receive the key information.
on the other hand
, if they start staying away from their family,
this
 will lead to
the
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disconnection among themselves and it will eventually end with miscommunications.
Therefore
,
this
 will have an adverse effect on the friendly environment at home and a lot of gaps will arise between parents, siblings etc.
Similarly
, after spending extended hours
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 the industry, they will feel tired and will not get enough space
take
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 rest after arriving at the house.
This
 will
also
 have a serve impact on health conditions as well. To conclude, Everyone should spend enough term with family as well as at
work place
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, as both plays
vital
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 role.
Such
 as,
Career
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 should be considered
as
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a priority, and at the same point equal importance should be given to the house members as well like, spending
quality
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 life during weekends, festival times etc.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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