in many cities construction of new houses and office buildings is not controlled, and it leads to everybody building in whichever style they want without thinking about design. Do you agree that advantages outeeigh the disdvantages?

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether to have own style of building without control and it has more
advantages
than disadvantages. In
this
essay, I am going to examine
this
question from a point of view of
advantages
and
then
explain why I believe there are more
advantages
. There are
people
who argue that the benefits of having own style house considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing
this
is
that
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their dream comes true to build their own house following their dream. It is
also
possible to say that
people
have different tastes about the home
such
as different construction of buildings. One good illustration of
this
is building houses in the countryside. someone who has dreamed of a house can realize it as long as they collect money. Usually, they are saving money year by year and
then
they start to construct their own building as the money is enough.
In addition
, many
people
want to build homes following some models in social media like traditional Korean houses or green buildings, which will make the environment more attractive because of the diversity.
For instance
, in a diverse, sub town the
people
who live here with different artists will make their own buildings based on their philosophy.
Also
, the disabled want to build homes considering their movement. They can not move easier than normal
people
.
Hence
it should be reflected in the construction of building
such
as making roads to access wheelchairs or safety devices in the Elevators and so on. In conclusion, I believe that a community where building their home based on their own style has a lot of
advantages
for them
such
as can reach their dream and having a better life.
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