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Nowdays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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In
the
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modern times, some people are more interested to have their own
business
instead
 of being employed by
companies
 or organisations. In my viewpoint, it stemmed from limitations that are
presenting
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 as rules in
companies
. I am
also
 convinced that a private
business
 poses a wide range of threats to people. From my personal perspective, one of the most important
part
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 of job satisfaction roots
from
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in
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 a sense of freedom. While
,
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 most
companies
 do not care about employees' feelings. Traditional
managements
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management
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 usually
are
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focuse
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focused
focus
 on profits.
Consequently
, they expect their employees to work overtime. In
this
 kind of
organisations
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 staffs
have
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 not enough room to
develope
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develop
 their
creativities
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. They are busy with tiring routine
works
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work
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. There is
not
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no
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sense
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a sense
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 of respect, progress, or
achievment
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achievement
achieved
 through these jobs. Due to the fact that job satisfaction is not about payment, people leave their jobs in order to follow their dreams by setting up their own firms. I
further
 believe that
,
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 starting a
business
 means a wide range of responsibilities, hard
working
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, and financial issues. When you are a member of an organisation, you do not have more responsibility than your own pacific projects.
However
, as an owner of a firm, you will face a vast number of issues. Regular costs, taxes, salaries of workers, and
also
 you need to have vital skills
such
 as good
interpersonals
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interpersonal
 and strong leadership skills. These issues may
causes
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 you
lost
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 all
leisure
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your leisure
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times
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.
Although
 it could give
a
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you a
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chance to grow in your career and
being
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be
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experiented
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experienced
, it is full of risks. In conclusion,
as a result
 of being deprived of freedom and space to expand creativity in
companies
, individuals prefer to have their own
business
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businesses
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.
However
, from my perspective,
this
 choice makes a large number of threats, especially
financially
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 ones.
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