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ex-criminals are good teacher for teenagers on danger of committing a crime

#ex-criminals #teacher #teenagers #danger #crime
It's thought that former prisoners who get
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 the right path are the best options for teenagers to be given notions about illegal and outlawed things .I totally agree with
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To begin
,some youngsters might be involved
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in crime
crime
incrime
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in crimes
,drugs,murders and so on.and those who underwent
such
 torture will be the ones who will describe all things clearly in order to keep them away from
this
 From my point of view,prior jailers will obviously know how to treat young people to make them aware of all the consequences that criminal life can lead to.
For instance
,there's a show on "youtube" which shows how prisoners teach teenagers about
this
 bad stuff. Another point to consider is how improperly their parents or someone else would probably explain
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.
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 if a person is not proficient enough in any subject,he wouldn't manage to deal with
this
 dilemma,whereas those who are experienced would tackle
this
 successfully.
for instance
, according to statistics half of adolescents who were caught on doing crimes and punished too roughly ended up by committing suicide To conclude,in order to shun
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 illegality by children,they should be taught properly and people who went through it are the best options
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