Learning English at school is often seen as more imporatant than learning local language. If these are not taught,many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion is it imporatant for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local language and if so how?

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concurrent
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world,
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industries and
culture
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are merging internationally leading to the survival of the strongest.
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of even languages.
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system allocated more value
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rather than a local dialect which causes
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of the latter. I strongly believe that
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teaching
English
as the major
language
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students.
To begin
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spoken
language
in the world is
English
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hence
importance increases.
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English
as
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a common
language
for communication.
Additionally
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reason development and growth of each country
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influenced by
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of performance in the market. To exhibit an excellent code of conduct and
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norms and value,
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way of communication is necessary.
Therefore
,
English
is mandatory as it is basic.
On the other hand
, giving more importance to a foreign lingo leaves detrimental effects on the existence of
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mother tongue.
However
, local
language
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less influence on the advancement of the nation holistically.
For instance
, speaking
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dialect in day-to-day life does not
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potential to grow.
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their connections internationally with their peers will be restricted when they can speak only their mother tongue. To reiterate,
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English
as
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course is crucial rather than a native tongue because it
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up new opportunities for the young generation to show their talent.
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