Some people feel that entertainer (e.g film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?
A big number of people suppose that celebrities
such
as film Linking Words
stars
, pop musicians or sports Use synonyms
stars
are paid too much Use synonyms
money
. Others think that entertainers receive fair salaries. These two ideas have as many advantages as disadvantages.
On the one hand, Use synonyms
stars
bring to companies more revenue than their wages. Use synonyms
For instance
, Cristiano Ronaldo's contract with Nike brings Linking Words
to
the brand more potential clients so their Change preposition
apply
incomes
could become higher because the company uses the image and personal fan base of the football star to generate more Use synonyms
money
. Use synonyms
This
deal is useful to both sides, Ronaldo has a massive contract, Linking Words
then
Nike has higher Linking Words
incomes
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, people prepare to spend Linking Words
a significant amounts
of Correct the article-noun agreement
a significant amount
significant amounts
money
on entertainment because it makes them happy. Entertainers are people who give us happiness so individuals do not spare Use synonyms
money
on concerts or films, Use synonyms
this
factor increases revenue from Linking Words
Use synonyms
stars
images.
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stars'
star's
On the other hand
, Linking Words
celebrity's
work is not vital as doctors who receive less Change noun form
celebrity
money
. According to that, a big number of individuals fully believe that entertainers are overpaid for no reason. Use synonyms
For example
, the work of a celebrity could not save your life or educate you so Linking Words
this
opinion is quite logical. Linking Words
Furthermore
, sportsmen are not so educated to receive Linking Words
such
huge Linking Words
incomes
because they will use Use synonyms
this
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money
incorrectly and will encourage the growth of prices.
In conclusion, I think that celebrities get fair wages because they generate more Use synonyms
money
and make us happy. Use synonyms
However
, other specialities Linking Words
such
as doctors or teachers deserve higher Linking Words
incomes
.Use synonyms
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