Рeople today spend less and less time interacting with other people in their neighborhood and this has a negative impact on communities. what are the possible causes and solutions to this problem?

Nowadays communication among people is very little and a busy lifestyle leads to
this
problem Tough official routine is the foremost reason for reducing communication.
Moreover
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sometimes social media
waste
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our time and we don't have leisure time to spend with our neighbors
.eventually
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Eventually
having a good relationship with neighbourhoods is challenging in
this
industrial life. A good remedy to cope with
this
problem is starting to know each other and try to speak with our neighbours about our job and education
also
we can help them
for example
we can make lunch for our neighbourhood .
therefore
if we start to visit each other we can repair our connection.
consequently
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more time in the neighborhood we can improve the quality of our
life
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