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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than a secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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To know another
language
besides
 your native
language
 is a skill we must have. The opinion of some professionals is that
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 if children start
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learning a
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language
 at primary
school
 rather
that
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 a secondary
school
 it will be better for them. In
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 to
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language
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 is important to happen when the
child
 is smaller, but why it can eventually be overwhelming. The main benefit of
staring
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 to learn a foreign
language
 at primary
school
 is
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 the younger they are the easier is for them to learn and accept. The
children
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 brain is faster and can adapt to anything
that is
 new and challenging.
For example
, a
child
 in
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 two years of
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 is learning how to understand and speak the native
language
 alone, only by observing. Clearly, it is better for children
to begin
 learning
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second-
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language
 at primary
school
.
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that
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this days
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 a lot of obligations and tasks for a young
child
 to do. They are overbooked with duties and don’t have time to play and enjoy
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they
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 childhood. For one
child
 it is a lot of stress to adapt to
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primary
school
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • cognitive abilities
  • pronunciation
  • self-conscious
  • cultural awareness
  • global society
  • proficiency levels
  • competitive job market
  • foundational skills
  • qualified teachers
  • recreational activities
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