Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face.
Someone believes that
people
are losing the ability to communicate Use synonyms
face
to Use synonyms
face
since they are using mobile phones and computers more than Use synonyms
the
past. I would argue that I disagree with Change preposition
in the
this
statement, Linking Words
my
opinions will be discussed Correct word choice
and my
as
the following reasons.
Nowadays, there are more methods of Change preposition
for
communications
available, especially mobile phones and computers. Fix the agreement mistake
communication
Although
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people
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use
more these new technologies, they are still can see each other while talking. Use synonyms
Similarly
, talking to each other in person, Linking Words
people
can see faces while speaking to their families or friends by using Use synonyms
cellphones
. Correct your spelling
cell phones
For instance
, they can video call or FaceTime. Linking Words
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Moreover
they can Add a comma
,Moreover
use
applications Use synonyms
such
as Zoom, Microsoft Teams and Linking Words
Skypes
to call Fix the agreement mistake
Skype
whoever
they desire to see faces and talk to. Change the pronoun
whomever
Therefore
, I disagree that Linking Words
people
can communicate Use synonyms
Use synonyms
face to
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face-to-face
face
less when they Use synonyms
use
either their mobile phones or computers.
In Use synonyms
additions
, unlike in the past, Fix the agreement mistake
addition
currently
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,currently
people
are able to get closer without waiting for a long time to receive Use synonyms
the
letters from their families, relatives, friends or customers. These Correct article usage
apply
day
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days
people
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are not only interface
faster, but they can Change the verb form
are not only interfacing
are not only interfaced
also
get closer since they Linking Words
use
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their
either smart gadgets or laptops. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Hence
new technologies provide more conveniences for Linking Words
long distance
communication. Add a hyphen
long-distance
As a result
of the availability of these types of devices, Linking Words
people
can connect and see faces even though they live far away from each Use synonyms
Use synonyms
others
. Change to a singular noun
other
Consequently
, I do believe that Linking Words
people
still can reach out better with these hi-tech Use synonyms
equipments
.
In conclusion, new technologies Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
such
as iPhone, iPad or Linking Words
Mcbook
not only be alternatives for Correct your spelling
MacBook
people
to contact Use synonyms
to
each other, Change preposition
apply
they
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but they
also
help Linking Words
people
to connect better. With helping of these devices, Use synonyms
people
not only can see and understand Use synonyms
more
each Correct quantifier usage
apply
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others
, but they can Change to a singular noun
other
also
have Linking Words
to
many options to connect to anyone regardless Replace the word
too
how
far they stay from each Change preposition
of how
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others
. For that Change to a singular noun
other
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reason
reasons
I disagree that Add a comma
,reasons
people
are losing Use synonyms
ability
to communicate Add an article
the ability
face
to Use synonyms
face
by using Use synonyms
high
technological appliances, but actually they have more abilities to connect and see each Replace the word
highly
Use synonyms
others
because of using these devices.Change to a singular noun
other
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