Many people today are choosing to live and work in another country after graduating from university in their home country. Why is this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Going abroad for
living
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a living
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or
job
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a job
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has been one of the most popular trends in recent years. A number of
people
have a tendency to live and work in a foreign country after completing
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a bachealor
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bachealor
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bachelor
bachelor's
degree in college in their motherland.
This
behavior
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behaviour
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provides some advantages and drawbacks will be explained below.
To begin
with, many
pepole
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people
want to go
foreign
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to foreign
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states to reach higher income than they have earned.
For example
, it is fact that particularly citizens of
under-developted
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under-developed
or developing countries have looked
a
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for a
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change to go
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to devoloped
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devoloped
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developed
parts of the world
such
as North America as well as Scandinavia and if they succeed
their
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in their
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purposes which
is
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are
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moving, they could earn
outstanding
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amount of money.
Secondly
, many well-educated
people
want to go
rich
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to rich
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countries to pursue their educational aims, because these states have applied diverse opportunities
these
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to these
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community
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communities
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. In fact, not only do these countries provide funding to
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a scientist
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scientist
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scientists
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, but
also
they find a multicultural environment in the states they want to go
.
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to.
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Therefore
,
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the
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possibility of reaching
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a high
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high income
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high-income
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level and educational opportunities constitute
biggest
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the biggest
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part of
advantages
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the advantages
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which humans can catch.
On the other hand
, there are some negative aspects
also
about going abroad to live or work.
First
of all, going away from family might be difficult for many young
people
. To illustrate, a young person who has graduated from
the
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apply
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university could be just
above
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in
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twenties
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the twenties
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,
might
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and might
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face
challenges
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the challenges
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of living foreign country far from his parents as well as friends.
Second
of all, meeting
varios
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various
cultures could be difficult for
people
who have moved
another
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to another
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state. In fact, a number of
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a citizen
the citizen
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citizen
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citizens
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who had gone
foreign
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to foreign
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country
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countries
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have encountered some problems
about
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with
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being part of the society which they want to
entegrate
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integrate
.
Hence
, living far from parents or friends and
possibility
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the possibility
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of
come
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coming
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acrossing
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across
some keeping up with
challanges
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challenges
in the new county account for
important
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an important
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part of the
disadvatages
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disadvantages
of going abroad. To sum up,
although
going abroad for living or
working
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work
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ensures diverse positive opportunities like earning money more than
recent
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in recent
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or multicultural
environment
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environments
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, there are many drawbacks
also
such
as living away from family and encountering unknown customs.
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