A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including use the for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that

animals

should be treated in the same way

humans

are and have similar rights,

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others think that it is more important to use them as we desire for

food

and medical

research

.

This

essay will discuss both points of view. Regarding the exploitation of

animals

, people believe it is acceptable for several reasons.

Firstly

, they think that

humans

are the most important beings on the planet, and everything must be done to

survival

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. If

this

means experimenting on

animals

so that we can fight cures for diseases,

then

this

takes animal suffering.

Furthermore

, it is believed by some that

animals

do not feel pain or loss as

humans

do, so if we have to kill

animals

for

food

or other uses,

then

this

is morally(

ethucil

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ethical

) acceptable.

However

, I do not believe these arguments stand up to scrutiny(

research

). The

first

reason is that it has been shown on plenty

occasions

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by secret filming in laboratories via animal rights groups that

animals

feel as much pain as

humans

do, and they suffer when they are

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kept in cages for long periods. Not only

this

, a substantial amount of animal

research

is done for making good results, not to

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cures for diseases, so

this

is unnecessary. it has

also

been proven that

humans

can get all the nutrients and vitamins that they need from green vegetables and fruits.

Therefore

, again, having to kill

animals

for

food

is not able to

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; Because destroying the right to life is a living thing and it cannot be considered permissible just because of its results which are beneficial for

humans

. In conclusion,

although

some people argue killing

animals

for

research

and

food

is ethical, I would argue there is sufficient evidence to indicate that

this

is not the case, and

therefore

, steps must be taken to improve the rights of

animals

.