A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including use the for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people believe that
animals
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should be treated in the same way
humans
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are and have similar rights,
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others think that it is more important to use them as we desire for
food
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and medical
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.
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essay will discuss both points of view. Regarding the exploitation of
animals
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, people believe it is acceptable for several reasons.
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, they think that
humans
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are the most important beings on the planet, and everything must be done to
survival
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. If
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means experimenting on
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so that we can fight cures for diseases,
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this
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takes animal suffering.
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, it is believed by some that
animals
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do not feel pain or loss as
humans
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do, so if we have to kill
animals
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for
food
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or other uses,
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this
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is morally(
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ethical
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, I do not believe these arguments stand up to scrutiny(
research
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). The
first
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reason is that it has been shown on plenty
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by secret filming in laboratories via animal rights groups that
animals
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feel as much pain as
humans
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do, and they suffer when they are
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kept in cages for long periods. Not only
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, a substantial amount of animal
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is done for making good results, not to
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cures for diseases, so
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is unnecessary. it has
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been proven that
humans
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can get all the nutrients and vitamins that they need from green vegetables and fruits.
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, again, having to kill
animals
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for
food
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is not able to
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; Because destroying the right to life is a living thing and it cannot be considered permissible just because of its results which are beneficial for
humans
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. In conclusion,
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some people argue killing
animals
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for
research
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and
food
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is ethical, I would argue there is sufficient evidence to indicate that
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is not the case, and
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, steps must be taken to improve the rights of
animals
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.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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