Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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their adulthood. Some

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random, but other

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that means that you will become a clever and rich person.

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education. Sometimes they have rich parents or special talents, but

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their lives. And I think that it's more important. But we don'

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you need to choose your own area, where you feel comfortable and interested. Overall, it's really difficult to become a

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Fully explain your ideas

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