People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?
Nowadays, sweet beverages spread massively
in
the whole world. The number of Change preposition
throughout
people
who drink sugar
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on the
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notion.
To begin
with, there are numerous reasons why sugar
-based growth occurs rapidly. First
and foremost, sugar
-based beverages have highly massive promotion through several influencers
who have million
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followers
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of followers
in
their social media. In Change preposition
on
this
circumstance, many customers will automatically be influenced by their advertisement
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advertisements
For instance
, Jerome Polin, one of Indonesian
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the Indonesian
influencers
, promoted sweet beverages and most of his followers bought and drank those products in the easiest ways. In addition
, it is undeniable that sugar
has a substance called dopamine which is effectful
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effective
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in
people
's stress. In other words
, the relationship between sugar
and dopamine for
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in
people
's mood
and emotions.
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moods
However
, all factors aforementioned above could be solved in several solutions. Firstly
, the government should collaborate with several influencers
for spreading healthy lifestyle awareness to citizens. It will gain people
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people's
influencers
sometimes become people
’s role models for their lifestyle. Secondly
, educators can educate their pupils through reading ingredient movements. It will increase both reading and knowledge about food materials inside. Ultimately, Scientists might formulate sugar
ingredients in healthy substances. In this
case, people
will have an alternative sugar
in a healthy version for mitigating the higher risk of sugar
consumption.
In conclusion, although
sugar
has fruitful substance in our body response. However
, it will be dangerous if it is over-consumed in the long term. Many stake-holders
have to spread awareness to prevent the impact of it through campaigns or education.Correct your spelling
stakeholders
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