In many countries, small shops are closing. Give your reasons about this. Is it positive or negative? Give examples from your knowledge and experience.
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shops
are being invisible in the recent past , this
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is Correct your spelling
pattern
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in Correct your spelling
observed
many
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any
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.Change to a plural noun
nations
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there are many reasons for Add a comma
,Apparently
this
drastic development.In my perspective it is a negative impact on the lower level merchents
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merchants
this
view
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, when we think about the
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people
mindset, they get attracted to Change noun form
people's
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aesthetic
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hoarding
accros
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across
However
, this
is one of the briliant
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stratergy
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strategy
the
huge supermarkets.Correct article usage
apply
For Example
, Consider the local vendor of vegitables
who tends to sell Correct your spelling
vegetables
the
freshly Correct article usage
apply
buyed
goods having no Correct your spelling
bought
air conditioned
installed in Add a hyphen
air-conditioned
there
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their
shops
, on the other hand
, we see the
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supermarkts
having stored products in Correct your spelling
supermarkets
supermarket
there
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their
air conditioned
halls and Add a hyphen
air-conditioned
proclaming
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proclaiming
then
as Correct your spelling
them
the
fresh items.Correct article usage
apply
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the sophesticated
sophesticated
set up of Correct your spelling
sophisticated
shops
and hordings
people tend to end up in the Correct your spelling
hoardings
big-markets
for Correct your spelling
big markets
there
supplies.
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their
Secondly
, one of the main cause
for Fix the agreement mistake
causes
this
would be the government policies, as it plans to develop the area or the local community , providing the
good supply chain for the society will be a paramount responsibility and they think providing the polished building and lavish looking Correct article usage
a
shoping
malls Correct your spelling
shopping
makes
the city look better.Change the verb form
make
For Instance
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choices in and around the city where as Change preposition
apply
this
was not the case a decade ago.Perticularly
for Correct your spelling
Particularly
this
reason local athourity
looks Correct your spelling
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this
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forgetting that many local or small scale businessman are losing Correct your spelling
standards
there
customers.
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their
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, the city many
have Correct your spelling
may
the
complex malls around but Correct article usage
apply
many
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may
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do not
a
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trust worthy
vendors as we find in the little Correct your spelling
trustworthy
shops
in our area circle. Adding on most
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the most
a most
results
the customer being Add the preposition
inresults
fromresults
burdenised
.
In my opinion, Correct your spelling
burdened
this
kind of improvement in the
civilization has just made Correct article usage
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citizens
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citizen's
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small-scale
buisness
persons around the globe.Correct your spelling
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