Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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authority should keep

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contained or provide them

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orientation. While the former is valid to some extent, I consider myself a supporter of the latter. Without a shadow of a doubt, putting

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behind the bars is not the optimal tactic for dealing with them. Depending on the seriousness of the crime committed wicked acts, the governor should consider how to find a solution with

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more properly.

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crimes

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as graffiti or pickpocketing, the government should consider an administrative fine and give a warning. Meanwhile, felonies like murder or

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a serious loss of poverty and life should give

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in order to keep safe for ordinary citizens and help crime steer clear of reoffending.

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behind the bars is not the best choice to deal with them. While the inefficiencies of sending

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to jail

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widely acknowledged, there

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ways to cope with them, especially by providing

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orientation. While

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gives

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awareness of their mistakes in the past,

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training can provide a means of making money. By doing so, they can reintegrate

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society and decrease the rate of reoffending.

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, there are a wealth of reformatories in VietNam which provide

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awareness and

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training to make them become

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holders in the handicraft or mechanic industry.

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training are

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effective methods of reforming

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. To sum up, even though

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behind the bars

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appropriate for a certain type of criminal, it is not an optimal choice to apply on a mass scale.

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training are more effective in dealing with them.