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in many countrie, a small numer of people earn extermly high salaries. some people believe that this good for the country, but other think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. discuss but these views and give your opinion.

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people
 have different views about the
government
 getting to the maximum
wage
 in
society
. some
people
 think a high
wage
 is suitable but I believe
government
 do not have access to
people
 who get a top-of-level salary. there are various reasons why it might be high
wage
 is good for
society
. if the company offers an excellent package to give to an employer it causes creates competition between
people
 and
also
 established motivation for graduated
people
this
 action is very beneficial for the country because most students do not decide to immigrate to other countries
this
 result, which saves talent in my country. ,
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however however
 I agree with those who argue that there should be a maximum
wage
. by introducing high salaries is competitive between
people
then
 they have not increased their knowledge and suitable skills for the job.
this
 reason causes a waste of money for the
government
.
on the other hand
, the top salaries do not advantage to companies and they have large tolerance pressure these factories must decrease employers and they do not have the possibility of paying salaries. in
this
 situation, unemployed rapidly goes up and the problem in
society
 is increasing.
for example
,if the
the
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poor are growing
then
society
 has a lot of problems than maximum salary. in conclusion, the
government
 should balance between salary in
society
 and set a limit plan on the
wage
 of the highest earns in
society
.
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