"Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter - thank them for the photos and for the holiday - explain why you didn't write earlier - invite them to come and stay with you"

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Dear Paing, Zaidi and Meskat, How are you guys doing? I hope you all are doing great in your studies! Exams are coming, right?

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, I'd like to thank you for the photos you sent me. I just received them yesterday and it was a pleasant surprise. All the pictures

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remind me of the great fun we had together, especially at the beach! Thanks so much for having me over and planning the whole trip. I'm sorry that I couldn't write to you all earlier. I just finished my final exams. As you know,

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is my final year and I had to work extra hard in order to do well. My results for the

first

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three years in college were awful so I had to make up for it

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year. I hope everything goes well. Since I'm free now and don't need to study, I'd like to invite you all to come over here. I think your exams will be over in one month's time right? Let me know if you all are able to visit me for a few days. You guys can stay in my guest room and I will plan everything for all of you. I look forward to your positive response. Best wishes,

Ryhan

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Ryan

ryhan.hseTue Jan 17 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

211 words

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