"Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter - thank them for the photos and for the holiday - explain why you didn't write earlier - invite them to come and stay with you"

#month #holiday #friends #photos

Dear Paing, Zaidi and Meskat, How are you guys doing? I hope you all are doing great in your studies! Exams are coming, right?

Firstly

, I'd like to thank you for the photos you sent me. I just received them yesterday and it was a pleasant surprise. All the pictures

also

remind me of the great fun we had together, especially at the beach! Thanks so much for having me over and planning the whole trip. I'm sorry that I couldn't write to you all earlier. I just finished my final exams. As you know,

this

is my final year and I had to work extra hard in order to do well. My results for the

first

three years in college were awful so I had to make up for it

this

year. I hope everything goes well. Since I'm free now and don't need to study, I'd like to invite you all to come over here. I think your exams will be over in one month's time right? Let me know if you all are able to visit me for a few days. You guys can stay in my guest room and I will plan everything for all of you. I look forward to your positive response. Best wishes,

Ryhan

Correct your spelling

Ryan

Submitted by ryhan.hse on Tue Jan 17 2023

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

211 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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