Students today can easily access information online . so libraries are no longer necessary.Do you agree or disagree?

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internet for information has become easy for

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a vital role for society and students,

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existence of libraries is a must. On the one hand, many libraries have become

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rather than

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reading and lending. technologies development has influenced to

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

accessible information
online databases
e-books
educational websites
community centers
physical books
literacy programs
peer-reviewed resources
misleading information
digital divide
high-speed internet
underprivileged communities
custodians of culture
archival material
conducive environment

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Students today can easily access information online . so libraries are no longer necessary.Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused bu this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Children from age 7-11 now spend more time watching television and/or playing vedio games than before. What are the effects of this on children, families and society? What are the possible solutions to this problems?