Students today can easily access information online . so libraries are no longer necessary.Do you agree or disagree?

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internet for information has become easy for

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a vital role for society and students,

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existence of libraries is a must. On the one hand, many libraries have become

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rather than

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reading and lending. technologies development has influenced to

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service

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

269 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accessible information
online databases
e-books
educational websites
community centers
physical books
literacy programs
peer-reviewed resources
misleading information
digital divide
high-speed internet
underprivileged communities
custodians of culture
archival material
conducive environment

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Students today can easily access information online . so libraries are no longer necessary.Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. 🔸Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples.

Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people believe cycle have a lot of advantage. whereas others believe bicycle has more disadvantage. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sport or doing execercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.